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Team Edward: Bella's Vows

In case you haven't noticed yet, we are running our very own political campaign this summer! We are rocking the vote--the Edward or Jacob vote that is. Who is your favorite? We are looking for your heated and passionate responses. We are looking for music videos and video blogs (which can be sent to tiffshakes@yahoo.com or posted on our youtube channel), and are looking for poetry, songs, artwork...you name it. All submissions must be turned in by July 4th. We will post the best of the best on the Novel Novice Twilight Blog on Wednesdays and Fridays. Feel free to vent, gloat, and post some of your stuff here! Let the games begin!!!!

Team Edward: Bella's Vows

Postby LupsandTnks on Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:28 pm

So I have no idea where to post this on here, but I thought you might like it. Hopefully it counts as a Team Edward submission.
This a poem I have written from Bella's perspective. We all hope that the two make it down the aisle in the Breaking Dawn. These are Bella's vows.
Tell me what you think, please.

My Vow to You

When I was broken, bruised and torn.
New in town.
You were there.
I was new at every feeling.
You didn't care,
because so were you.
My head fits your shoulder perfectly,
your hand is always glued to mine.
And when I think about the future
It's only you I see.
Listen to me now, because I'll tell you every day
How much I love you, you alone, and no one else
And no matter what happens, if you are there to catch
my every trip, it'll be okay
Because all I want is you.
Your smile
Your heart
Your family
and, yes, your soul

There is no chance that I'll ever leave
And if you even think about disappearing,
let me tell you this:
This time I will not stand back
This time I will follow
This time I will hunt you down.

I know you'll never leave.
Already, you're afraid to.

All I want is you, and no body else
No man could ever fill my heart more than you.
Nobody can read me like you,
even though you claim you cannot

When you smile, I smile too
When my heart beats, I know yours would too
It's only you I see.

You were there, you saw it all
You saved me countless times.
From trips, from sins, and from myself
So keep on smiling, Baby.
Because I'll be smiling back.
If hearts were meant to shatter,
you heal my every crack.

Don't think about holding me at arms length.
Don't think about making me wait.
Because you are here standing with me now, and
I love you
You know how much I do
I do.
I say I do.


Forgive me if there are any typos. :oops:
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Postby Twilight.Music.Love.<3 on Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:43 am

That was realllyyy good LusandTnks!! i love itt!
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Postby KoriLovesTwilightALot on Sat Jun 21, 2008 4:29 am

Awwwwww :lol:

That was really adorable! I kind of am a huge poetry-hater, but that was really sweet and really well done!!! Nice work!!!
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Postby RaeofDarkness on Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:29 pm

WOW. WOW WOW WOW....
I stink a poetry. That was beautiful!
Hey, Mom....WHAT DO YOU MEAN I CANT HAVE EDWARD CULLEN FOR MY BIRTHDAY???
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Awesome!

Postby Cuicken on Sun Jul 13, 2008 1:22 am

That was amazing :D. I really hope they actually get married :)

but that was really amazing, like no joke. Just watch I bet those will be in Breaking Dawn and I'll be like, omg you're a mind reader! :D

~Amy 8)
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