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Okk so this is my second attempt in posting this idkk what it is but the ppl keep on deleting it =/
PLEASE DONT DELETE THIS IT MEANS NO HARM AND ITS JUST A FANFICTION =)

anywayy my guy friendd who loves twilight was craving a honeymoon scene with a little more detail soo we wrote one [=
soo this is after they are swimming in the ocean and i hope u enjoy
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NOTE: WE ARE NOT I REPEAT NOTTTT TRASHING STEPH MEYER WE LOVE LOVE LOVE HERR WE JUST CRAVE MORE DETAIL =)
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As Edward swiftly carried me in his arms to our white bedroom, I tried to remember the last time he and I had been completely alone and my last attempts to seduce him. I felt the blood rush to my face and thanked my screwed up mind that he could not tell what i was thinking. My thoughts turned into a daze as he flashed his stunning crooked smile and slowly began to kiss my across my throat as if i were the only thing that even mattered in the world. My mind was in a daze-his touch, his scent, his feel-it was all to perfect. I slowly snapped back to reality, just before our first truely physical encounter, that maybe i should reconsider my actions. No, I couldn't. I was so close I could feel it.
Edward noticed my sudden hesitation and a look of thousands of emotions ran acaross his face. "Bella..." he was suddenly nervous. Convinced he was going to kill me.
"No, Edward." I decided to answer his question before i could hear his regret out loud. "I am ready. I have been ready ever since I knew I was in love with you." The look didnt wear off. He knew he was hurting me by making me worry. I had to do my best to lie, for his sake, or even lighten the mood. "Besides you promised me." I said with a huge, devious grin on my face. “Well beggars can’t be choosers,” Edward mumbled.
There was a definetely a change in the mood after that. He was suddenly more excited than ever. The nerves shook off and it was going to happen tonight.
"Bella..." Edwards voice trailed off.
"What is it Edward?" I cooed patiently as he focused his now liquid eyes on me as me gave me a look into his soul.
"I want to make sure youre safe," he repeated.
I sighed and pulled him closer to me, signaling for what I've wanted ever since i agreed to Alice's slightly-over-the-top-wedding. "Edward, I'm more safe with you out of anyone in the world. You will not hurt me. I know you won't I just have the feeling in my gut, Edward." I closed my eyes and let out a huge exhale, "Please." I whispered burying my face into his bare, sculped chest.
Edward sighed his heavenly sigh, as if a young child had just smacked his palm through a cluster of windchimes, and touched his firm, icy hand to my hips. I lost my breath at the touch, almost a whisper only he could hear, as i positioned myself above Edward's beautiful, unclothed body.
That's when everything started. It wasn't as hard I thought it would be. It wasn’t painful at all. It felt good, of course physically, but more like our souls were connected like my magnets to my refridgerator. It was as magical as everyone had said it was. All those health classes seemed immature when they would warn the young, somewhat innocent, teenagers against sex.
As we started moving, quickening. I closed my eyes and almost let my mind wander. This experience had me remembering every emotion I felt towards Edward all at the same time. That could have added to the pleasure. Every touch, every embrace. No, nothing could compare to this feeling right now. Everything was right for once. No harm, no foul.
Edward was doing very well actually at not-hurting me. He was so careful but still so passionate. I could tell he was putting his full effort into this as he would stop himself as soon as he started to hold my arms too tight. I knew if i woke up with a single scratch he would blame himself. This would never happen again until i began my new life as a beautiful, golden-eyed vampire. I had to make the most of it before it was over. Thinking about my new life frightened me a little bit. I knew that all i owuld want was blood, this moment wont happen again after a few centuries. I would be a monster. At this point fear would overwhelm me but no, this moment was far too amazing to let my fears ruin it.
I wildly knotted my fingers into his bronze hair, ruffling it just right so it contrasts perfectly with his crumpled, comcentrated face.
"Bella....." He sighed softly. But this time he wasnt sighing to call me off, he was sighing out of pleasure. I could not imagine how he could get any pleasure out of love from me when he was a beautiful vampire and i was an average human. and it was just how I pictured it in my dreams, when they weren't about The Volturi. My lips were too frozen to speak so all i could manage was a little smirk, as i leaned forward against his marble chest, falsely hoping he had a heartbeat, and it was pulslating throughout his body like mine was. I felt like a sprinter who tripped and fell, for my heart was sputtering out of control as Adam and Eve tasted the forbidden fruit.
It was too perfect. So perfect that , of course, it had to come to an end. Edward had finished. It stung a little when it happened. Everything went so cold, so ice cold as he groaned for the last time of the night. He squeezed my arms a little too hard as it was happening, That hurt, but I wasn't going to stop my Romeo. I heard a rippling noise come from his head, his mouth. Maybe it was the sheets. I couldn’t make it out as i was trying to only concentrate on me and Edward. Two more rips followed and as confused as I was, I didnt care. I bruise so easily, which is a terrible trait for he will never forgive himself if he sees any damage he might have conflicted on me as my side of our ridiculous compromise was fulfilled.
After he was finished, we rolled gently onto our backs. He started to kiss my shoulder, then moved to the core of my neck. He kissed me under my ear and along my jaw as his hands lowered to the small of my back. My heart started beating rapidly. My face must have been bright red, how embarassing. Leave it up to me to blush at a simple kiss after all we went through tonight.
He chuckled and rested his read on my shoulder. "Bella my love, your heart is racing. You should relax and get some sleep, we wouldn’t want for your heart to stop now would we?" He winked at me.
"No." I didnt want this night to end. It can't. This had reminded me of our long plane ride home from Volterra where I made a complete fool of myself believing that he would walk away as soon as I closed my eyes.
"You need your rest, love."
"No."
He chuckled his musical laugh just as breathtaking as its ever been.
"Mmmm....." My voice trailed off and the last I heard of my first night as Mrs. Cullen was Edward’s angelic voice, humming my lullaby.


ALSOOOOO WE REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY NEED IDEAS OF WHAT ELSE WE SHOULD WRITE ABOUT!!!! PLEASE PLESAE PLEASEEE LET US KNOWW WHAT U GUYS WANNA SEE IN OUR NEXT FANFICTION WE LOVE TO TAKE REQUESTS
thanks for everything you guyss
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ok ya'll i am like edwards biggest fan ever and i think your doing a good job writing but...............finishing first and not letting bella get her piece is soooooo unlike edward! he is a gentleman and would make sure that she enjoyed every single second as much as he did!
sorry but i need the world to know that edward would NEVER EVER do anything wrong!